A poem I wrote

When we were young

Things were different

We giggled at the sight of silly faces

Our cake of mud’s fall was our greatest sorrow

Jumping in the rain puddles

Brought out the joyous sound of a child’s laugh

Gloom descended when someone took the swing

That we desired

Tears fell when our bucket we built our crooked sandcastle with, was taken.

But as the years passed

Those thing was eviscerated from our mind and soul

The silly face

The mud cake

The rain puddles

The swing and the bucket

They were now insignificant

As we left the bright days of our youth behind, the darkness of the world

Was unveiled

Thus, the things that we held dear in childhood

No longer did

Then came school and the weight of grades and praise

Beauty’s mask and delicate grace

The labyrinth of love and threads of friendship

The desire to numb the pain

The unrelenting grip of anxiety and shame

Eyes filled with tears

The fragile dance of life and death

Filled our hearts

Oh, how I long for the time

When the fallen mud cake

Was my biggest sorrow.

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That’s really good!

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Chef’s Kiss :face_savoring_food: This is a really nice poem!

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This is so beautiful. Keep up the good work <3 :two_hearts:

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Thank you​:heart: I was thinking of posting some more of the ones I wrote!

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Yes please! I hope you understand why I chose that gif btw :slight_smile:

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yes, the grief over losing the wonder, the goodness, the innocence, it hurts.

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Yes I did! Don’t worry<3

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