Can I get your opinions on my MCs?

Hey guys! So my wrist has been absolutely killing me for the past couple of weeks from crocheting so much. So, when taking breaks from crocheting, I’ve been working on some art. I’m very new to digital art and it has very much been a tough learning process. I was hoping I could maybe get some opinions on my characters?

I’ve been working on a book for a few years now and I just can’t for the life of me decide how I want the story to end. There’s too many different ideas I have, so I’ve decided to learn how to make a Visual Novel game instead. That way I can use ALL my ideas and people can choose how the story ends. The main guy is Jax and the main girl is Anna. I’m going to be cleaning them up a bit tomorrow. I realize now that I missed some bits! :sweat_smile: But yeah…









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wow those are so goood did you draw them

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I can’t get the life of me to even draw that well so I think it’s amazing anddd when I go through the pics quickly it makes a lil animation lol :)))

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Yeah i did! I used to draw anime and Manga characters all the time, but I’ve never been very good when it comes to shading. And learning digital art is SO different from drawing on paper… it’s definitely been a struggle to learn, but I’ve been practicing and i think I’ve gotten a lot better.

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I like these concepts, but I can’t really read what their personalities are like

I know these are probably for practicing expressions, but instead of applying the same 10 expressions to each character I’d first choose five that resonate with that one characters’ personality

(but I’m not saying that a grumpy character only has annoyed expressions, I’m just saying they’ll probably be annoyed most of the time)

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