die/ocean tears (poem)

it’s my first poem
pls no hate-

the ocean waves
are my tears of sufferings
you did this to me
and ill never forget it
why do you have to
be existing?
ill find peace,
one day,
and when you die,
I’ll be happy to never to your face
oh how I wish you were gone!
wishing you pain, death, and no one
you tormented me
and broke my heart into two,
just like you always do

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I WANNA LIKE IT SO BAD BUT I USED ALL MY LIKES :sob:
rlly good tho! You’ve got potential

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wow. thats good… and intense. good job sakura!!!

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u can use all your likes? how do you do that?

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stop cali that’s amazing​:sob: seems like it has a lot of emotion behind it tho, u sure ur ok?

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it’s from two months ago, I forgot to post it lolz

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one simply does. it’s called trying to become a regular :skull:

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cali so good!
but…u good?

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this is amazing for your first poem calz !!
its really beautiful :sob:

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That’s good. Very intense too.