Feedback plss

Okay so I wrote something for a poetry and spoken word competition and I need feedback on my recording

Constructive criticism welcomed and encouraged

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This poetry is great! Very relatable and thank you

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No problem!

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I love it! Maybe you could try to build a main part of it? Like add more emotion or speak louder on a part you really want the audience to feel to make that one section stand out.
Idk tho- I definitely couldn’t do this… I sound like I’m boutta cry whenever I try to present or speak in front of ppl :,)

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Thank you!

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Why is this so deep and personal? Ambre you are such a good writer, this actually hits me so deep. I can relate SOO MUCHH to this. I get insecure about my stomach and wish it was flatter and thinner like other girls.

You really know how to write :sob::sob:

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Thank you!

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That one of the best and most relatable poems I have heard in a while. You did a really great job on this one.

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Tysm!!

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