Oakh everyone Iām making a cute demon pattern and Iām trying to make this āspike collarā and idk if this is coming across right 
Please be honest with me! Iāve been told the white is maybe too close together but idk I think if I did it too far apart that when I do the arms it would look like thereās not enough āspikesā so opinions would be awesome
Iād also love some maybe ideas to improve? Maybe a different technique I can use 
or what every comes to mind
I think it looks really good!
Proportions are good! And that comes from a perfectionist!
I think it looks good how you have itā
I lokd it!!!
thats soo cute!! I think you def arnt overdoing it with the spikes & are prob just having artist syndrome (overthinking because been looking at it to long and can see the mistakes)
Whoever said his spikes arenāt good is wrong xD
This is SO CUTE and if youāre going to have others test it for you I would LOVE to be tagged! He is ADORABLE!
One more in support of the current version here! 
itās perfect!
Itās fine as is! 
If you still want suggestions, do less stitches in the bobble stitch to shrink shape. Then add more black stitches for even spacing if needed.
it looks amazing how it is! :3
I think it looks good! After you should make an angel pattern 
Itās perfect! Also I love the sketch.
I think they look perfect
Ik this probably isnāt useful, but I think it looks great! I donāt see anything wrong with it.
I think the only thing that would make it closer to the image is possibly more spacing between the āspikesā but it looks really good!!
Iād suggest reducing the number of stitches in the bobbles so they are a little smaller. 
It looks great how you have it!
I think It looks great! But if you want to try something else I would do 4 in a Mr and then sc, inc, 2 times. Hope this helps!
I looks so good! Its gonna look amazing!
