Pattern writing help - Too wordy

[Zodiredo]

Hello everyone,

I am currently writing a pattern for my shop and I am finding that it is too wordy. I know myself and when I find wordy patterns I don’t wanna make it anymore (my crochet toxic trait fr) and I don’t want others to do that with mine. I have no clue how to shorten it while keeping the clarity with the mesh stitches and increases. If anyone can help I’d really appreciate it.

Screenshots of pattern issues

Tldr, how do I make my pattern shorter but still clear?

Thank you,
Zod/Jay

[cb1675]

i think it would help to just say (ch 3, dc, ch 3, dc) instead of saying to do it in twice in the same space. that might make it a bit shorter ^_^