OMG wren is my sisters name (shes 3)
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awwww 
u can call me wren if its not too much of a brain trip 
coco is fine too tho
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that was long!!!
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hehe sorry lol
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I love the long ones
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sorry i took a while to do another story time. i’ve been at my grandparents house. 
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Chase was just outside when my father carried me out. He couldn’t call my name because he hadn’t learnt it yet. So he pounced at my father making direct contact with his neck with his teeth. Dad wavered for a second as though a hallucination as he cried out in pain and for a second I saw Ao Yin. And I heard Ao Yin’s voice yell. But then his voice turned into my dad’s voice and I saw Chase. I was enraged that Chase had the boldness to bite my father and I kicked him. I knew it wouldn’t harm him but what else could I do? Chase looked at me with those deep, unwavering eyes and he whimpered. My hand was still in my father’s but it didn’t feel like skin anymore. I looked over and saw Ao Yin’s bony hoof. I screamed and backed away.
The adrenaline forbade me from feeling pain as Chase leapt at Ao Yin.
“Run!” Chase shouted before his jaw hit the hideous bull humanoid.
“I thought you said not to run!!” I shouted back
“You need to run NOW!” He ordered.
Then I ran. And now I could feel the pain. In my shoulder, in my side. And now in my legs. I didn’t know where I was running, all our stuff was back at the tepee and I couldn’t recognize my surroundings. Then I ran into a clearing. In it were 6 trees. Each had a different symbol painted on it. Before I had time to investigate, Chase came running into the clearing.
“Whe–, you know what, I’m not gonna ask.”
We looked around the trees and saw very intricate pictures instead of symbols. One was of a Chinese Palace, the next a Village, the third was of a Cave, the fourth was a Mushroom, the fifth, a River, and the last a Castle. There were little knots next to all of them.
“I think I know what these are…” Chase said.
I looked at him waiting for him to explain.
“These are the Six Trees. They look different in every realm.”
“Is there anything else you care to share with me? Or are you gonna keep being mysterious?” I teased.
“They’re portals. Pull on the knot.” Chase ordered. I pulled on the knot next to the castle and a rush of cold air was directed at me. Was that… snow?
And then for the fourth time, I heard rustling.
“Go now!” Chase yelled.
“Are you crazy?! I can’t go out there! Choose a different tree!”
“There’s no time!” Chase shouted as he bunted me through the tree and into that cold biome. The cold air ate at my wounds as I lay crumpled in the snow. I stood up and immediately Chase crashed into me. We tumbled down a snowbank I didn’t know was there and we lay in the snow. My bandages on my shoulder were ripped and it was bleeding again. At least it wasn’t infected. I blacked out.
another long one!!
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oooh i love it so far!! the storyline is so good
you are so amazing at writing!!
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Yay! So good as always!
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YASSSS this is soooo GOOOOODD!!!
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“What happened?” I said, very dizzy.
“We passed out.” Chase said, shivering.
“You did too?” The world was spinning now. I didn’t hear what Chase said, because I was staring at my fingers. The tips were frozen over. In my mind, again I saw the Keys. The new one moved even closer to the center of its spiral. It was almost there, just an inch or two.
And then I saw my hands again.
“Oh that’s fun,” I said, swaying as I was even more dizzy than before. The wind was pushing me as well. “I’ve got seven fingers on this hand. Or is that 10?” I chuckled.
Then I fell on the ground. I felt pinpricks and I looked down. It wasn’t snow, it was blades of grass. I looked back up and there was a butterfly.
“Are you ok?” I heard Chase say, but his voice was muffled and disoriented.
I got up and went towards the butterfly, stumbling and feeling a little tipsy. With a drunk smile, I reached for it multiple times but never caught it. I felt little tickles on me. I chuckled as I looked around me for what was causing it. Suddenly, I was drawn up into the air by a swarm of butterflies. They carried me towards something in the distance. As we approached it, I saw that it was a palace. The butterflies carried me through the window and put me on the floor. A king rose on the stairs leading up to the room.
“Welcome back, Wren.”
I laughed, “What do you mean, welcome back?”
I then watched as his blue clothes transformed to red and white.
“Keys, come here!”
I looked at my fingers again. “Look Mr. King! I’ve got 8 fingers on this hand! Heheh!” Wasn’t that funny?
A princess entered the room in golden attire. “Yes master?”
“Why is Wren still having hallucinations?!”
“What are you talking about? Hallucinations? I’m perfectly fine…” I retaliated, though it wasn’t very strong as the room started spinning. Then the king grew a white beard. And the princess turned into gold.
“Well the effects last for a little while, but wear off after a certain amount of time.”
The king got very angry and his crown turned into a hat with a pom pom at the end of it.
“You look funny!” I said, pointing at the King.
He looked at me with hatred in his eyes and smacked me across the cheek. I fell to the ground, my head hitting the hard stone. I blacked out.
i feel like this isn’t my best work…
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“Not ur best work” WHATTTT THATS SOOOOOO NOT TRUE!!! This is BRILLIANT!!!
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awwww thank u!! 
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Ofc!!!
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okay, first of all, SOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD!!!
second of all, not your best work??!? I CALL CAP 
this is amazinggggg!
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here’s another long one
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When I woke back up, my head was clear and I was in a chair.
‘Where am I?’ Then with a start, I realized. I was back in Santa’s ballroom.
“I’ve heard you’ve been rather naughty.” he said as I struggled against my restraints. I was locked to a chair.
“Ao Yin was only trying to return you to me when you went through that tree.”
“Where’s Chase?”
“That blasted dog?!” Santa shouted, he quickly calmed himself down. “Oh don’t worry. He’s been taken care of.”
“What have you done to him?!” struggling even more violently against my restraints. The wheel of Keys rolled in and once again, my eyes were drawn to it. The first Key moved towards the center of its spiral and I felt sleepy.
“Oh, we can’t have you doing that now can we… that’s naughty.” Santa said with a devious smile on his face. I tried fighting against my bonds but it wasn’t as aggressive as it once was. I now knew it was futile to fight. My eyes still looking at the Keys, I heard a door open. The third Key moved to the very center of its spiral. But nothing happened. It wasn’t directed at me. I grew awake and could look at who arrived. Who was that?
“Ah, Larissa. Come and say hello to your sister.”
Larissa?! But how? She’s in her twenties, I’m only a teen!
“Confused are we? Time passes differently here than in the Swamp between the Sands of Time. While you stayed relatively the same age there, Larissa came and grew up here.”
Larissa strode over to me, looked me in the eye and punched me. I looked up at her in disbelief. She punched me again. Then the bonds unsnapped.
“Fight me.” Larissa said. I merely looked away. Never had I been this lonely. Without my father, without Chase, and now without my sister, it was too much. And then Larissa punched me again, square in the jaw. I fell to the ground.
“Fight me!!” Larissa shouted.
“No! I’ll never fight you.” She began punching me and kicking me even harder than before. I felt bruises forming and when she kicked my side and my shoulder, I couldn’t help but cry out. The pain was too much. I passed out.
I saw the Chinese Palace again with the carvings.
“We’ve been slack with you. Helped you because we felt pity. However, it’s time to become your own dragon figuratively speaking.
We honour you that you’ve refused to fight your sister, even though only in self defense. Whenever you call, ‘I call upon the spirits of the dragons.’ you will be imbued with a great power for a short amount of time. This power will be more impressive than before. Use it wisely. I’m glad that we got to say our full message.___ oh wait!–” I heard no more as I was rushed away from that wonderful place. The only one I ever felt safe after this whole craziness happened.
this one is more than a page on my google docs 
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Still as good as ever 
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aww
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yessss so goooood!!!
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YOU GUYS ARE AWESOME!!! I CAN’T STRESS THIS ENOUGH!! 
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I woke up to Larissa kicking me.
“FIGHT ME!!” she screamed.
“Never!” I shouted, clutching my head and squeezing my eyes shut.
Larissa continued to bruise me and I didn’t know how long she would continue.
“I call upon the spirits of the dragons!” I screamed, wondering what it would do. Wanting justice, I took the form of Bi’an. I sprung at Larissa who screamed in terror. I could barely control the spirits, there was so much power.
The four fangs of Bi’an tore at Larissa’s neck. Ending her life.
As Bi’an, but as myself as well, I stared in horror at what I had done. Staring down at the gore, I hardly noticed Santa creeping towards me. I looked up just in time. The spirit was fading, I couldn’t hold it much longer. So I used the remaining to rush out of that room as fast as I could. I found an abandoned room and laid down to cry. Now I truly was alone. But I had to get out of there fast. Santa surely knew his fortress better than I.
I got up, wiped the tears off my face and prepared to set off. But I knew that I wasn’t going to be able to continue. It hit too hard.
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Don't read if u don't want spoilers!!
You’re not gonna believe what happens to Chase!!
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NO I wanna read the spoiler SO BADDD!!!
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