Hey guys I have a short story writing competition coming up so I’m working on my short story atm. I was wondering if some of you (people who are good at grammar, punctuation, writing, and language) could read my story and help me find any mistakes, or give me suggestions.
Secondly in my story, the villain wants to kidnap the detective to get some information or something, suggestions on what he’s looking for and why?
he’s looking for information about his wife cause she is in the prison and he want to safe her because he loves her but she killed someone and thats the reason she is been prisoned
I can be an editor for you 
idk what to do for the story, sorry lol
Thanks should I send it to you!
if you need another editor i’d be happy to help! best of luck 
I’d love to be an editor, maybe he’s looking for information on a crime that happened a few years ago or recently