a lil poem by me

Hiiiii! This is for a writing competition so pls let me know what you think :bowing_woman:t2: :revolving_hearts: !

A smooth sea never made a skilled sailor,
As the storm gets near,
Will you brave the storm?
Or will you fear failure and return to the pier?
You can brave the storm and claim the seven seas,
And emerge broken but beautiful,
Victorious, valiant, and at ease.
Because you know you gave your best,
You gave it your all.
The greatest glory is not in never failing
But rising everytime you fall.
And as you rise others will follow
Or you can let the fear of failure hold you back.

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Ooooh ness this is really good

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Great job ness!

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amazing<3

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Amazing :star_struck:

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ness this is so good!

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WOW THATS AMAZING!!! <3 it’s prettyyy

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Beautiful! :heart:

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Beautifully said! Good luck with the competition! :smiling_face: :blue_heart:

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Thats really good!!

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gorgeoussss poemm!!:clap::sparkles:

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