I was wondering if somebody could help me to see if I can make any improvements on this design?
I think the idea is still cute but overall I think there is something missing 
I made a tester call on IG but it did not have that expected success, not gonna lie.
I am open to constructive feedback! Thank you 
(Despite appearing in the image “tester call” I’m not seeking any testers yet at the moment
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I Love him! He is so adorable!
You could always experiment with different colours, for example, a green turtle with a pink bunny!
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What if the turtle had bunny ears? I think this design is so cute overall and perfect the way it is! I don’t have instagram or else I would test, sorry! Good luck though! <3
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i think it looks so cute but maybe add accessories to the turtle. pls tag me on ur tester call i rlly wanna test this!!
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To me there are a couple things going on here that make this a less than ideal design, despite the excellent construction and overall cuteness of the different elements.
- It looks like a turtle carrying a decapitated rabbit head on its back.
Now, that can appeal to some people, but if you’re going for something morbid I would suggest leaning into the gruesomeness. E.g. blood, Xs for eyes, make the turtle face fierce, etc.
If you’re not going for something morbid, I would reconsider this mashup.
To make it a cute mashup that doesn’t have this somewhat disturbing under current, how about a bunny riding on a turtle? You could show the edge of the regular Green turtle shell, then have an adorable bun perched on top.
- Color scheme - though both colors make sense for the individual subjects, together the overall effect is somewhat drab since it’s cream and tan. I would suggest spicing up one or both of the colors.
This is just my personal opinion. I hope you get to a place that works for your design and market. The design as is could also be tweaked to make a turtle/bao dumpling mashup that would be adorable!
Again, excellent design elements overall, hope you get where you want to be. 
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I can’t thank you enough for the suggestions!!
I really appreciate the feedback and the honesty !
I think I will give it a turn and think about the design you suggested, it will fit better! 
The first take could be more of a pattern suited for the spooky season maybe.
It was primarily intended for Easter to be honest 
I don’t see this as a failure but as a way to redirect this to another path.
Thank you so much for real!!
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Thank you so much for your sweet words!!
I wasn’t sure about the outcome of this but seeing that has some acceptance it really warms my heart
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I will leave to the spooky season!
And as @suettle said, the color palette was too similar 
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Love that color suggestion!! And thank you for the feedback 
I made a blue bunny with a little lighter shade of blue 
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Putting our work out there as designers is so hard! We never know what kind of reception our little yarn babies are going to get in the world, and sometimes it’s not what we expect.
I’ll keep an eye out around spooky season because I know someone who would love a macabre turtle bunny mashup. But glad it is finding some love here on Ribblr. This is the BEST craft community!
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I totally agree with you!! And again thank you from all the sweet words you had before.
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ok!! are you planning on posting a tester call?
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may i ask what yarn you use?
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i think the underside of the turtle should be white! the underside being darker than the “skin tone” of the turtle makes it seem like the turtle is upside-down. Also, I think it would help if you moved the front fins closer to the head by a stitch or two, and move all four fins down a row. Just suggestions!! <3
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indeed! there’s no problem in letting you know!
I used for this project velvet yarn from a spanish brand called Isabella Yarns, but I think that in Aliexpress you can find it very very similar!
I don’t know how much costs there, but a few days back I did some research and the skein of 75gr was about 2’65€ more or less 
I won’t be doing a tester call yet, I think I will improve the design and let this to October!
but can I count with you once I launch the next tester call for the new design if that’s okay with you!
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Yesssssssss I love your stuff so muchhh
When do you think your next tester call will be?? IM WAITINGGGG
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ofc
yes ok that’s fine with me!!
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Thank you so much for your sweet words and suggestions!! <3<3<3
I will note them as well 
I notice that I might not have played my cards that best with the choosen color palette XD
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In the blue turtle I was using Alize Softy on the fuzzy yarn part of the turtle, i was forgetting to tell you! <3
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no problem!! my adhd noticed and refused to not not post XD
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