A long time ago, I met a woman. From where she came I do not know. She had 7 layers of teeth, 32 in each row. Then all of a sudden I fell into something, a body of an animal of which I did not know. In it, adults were fed martinis, and a drink of sprite with a green grape in it, all served by a crow . We were then given a raw egg, and drank it, told by the crow we would see a god we did not know. When I woke up, I saw my brother, he was yelling for me with his brow furrowed. I opened up my laptop, and typed with my feet in the voice to text program “It is good to know you are never alone, even in a place full of people who you mostly do not know.”
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Its structure reminds me of Shel Silverstein.
However, you should write it out as if you’re saying out loud with spaces added at the end of each sentence that rhymes.
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