poemmmm

guys before i do antyhing i am not a writer what so ever! but for english i have to write a poem so I decided I would share mine with u
the inspo for it was from @fortruler so thank u :two_hearts:

GLOW STICK

Have you ever wondered why life is so unfair

Just asked a simple

Why

Why does this have to be me

What have i done to deserve this

Have i not been loyal

Have i not been trustworthy

But it turns out

Life isn’t that simple, you see

We need to be broken

To learn how to love

To move forward

To grow

We must be broken

How do we expect to know joy if we haven’t shed tears

How do we know peace if we haven’t held fears

We need to know rock bottom

Before we can soar

We cannot take a glow stick and expect it to glow

It needs to be broken

It needs to realize it has more in store for it than it knows

That one day it will glow

But it can’t until it is broken

Until it’s at its rock bottom

Then, and only then, can it glow

When did the world get so dark

When did the glow from a simple glowstick go out

When did we forget we need to be broken to shine

When did we lose our glow?

any suggestions before I turn it in? (cause I really need this grade if u yk yk)

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Slayyyyyy :sparkling_heart::sparkling_heart::sparkling_heart::heart::two_hearts:

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hehe thanks pookieeee
(this took way to long and I’m frickin over ittt)

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I love thiis! I’m a poet, but writing poems in English is way harder to me. You did awesome!

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omg so niceeeee you slayed it

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Thats so gooooooood!!! that turned out awesome;)

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Omg im a poet but im not this good. #goals

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this is so pretty!! great job :DD

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o. m. g. ommie? 10/10 i love ittt :sparkles:

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Woooooo this is so good!! Congratsss >w< I could never write a poem T^T I hate writing lolsies :p

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OMG sameee the only reason why I did that was because I need a graddeeee

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What we don’t do for grades lol XD

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That is SO. GOOD. 10/10!!! Idk what grade ur in (pls don’t say your grade anyhow) or how your teacher grades so I dont have any edits, but … its genius. :heart: :glowing_star:

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luckyyy my grade depends on it

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