So this is my poem
**“Your hair is as orange as flames **
**Your eyes are as piecing blue as the sky **
**Your heart is as bright as the sun **
**Your smile makes my day **
I hope to see u soon will u be mine forever?”
So if u have any suggestions to make this better please tell me
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