song in progress (lyric ideas??)

Soooo ive been kinda inspired to write a song, but idk where to start so ill put sum lyrics.
V1
Life isnt quite what i thought it’d be,
A cycle of love, despair, and suffering.
Sometimes, I think about things i wish i could change.
My abilty to stay positive seems to be buffering.
I’m running out of patience.
CHORUS
But i have time…
I have time to gain these things i wish i had.
I’m only just beginning this treacherous walk.
So why worry, why care
Enjoy these moments, before theyre behind a lock.

Idk if this is good :pensive: any suggestions?

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Love it! And idk how to help with writing caus it just kinda flows out of me lol, good luck!!!

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I like that! Making the other verses is kinda easy depending on what you want the meaning behind it to be so rlly js use the same meaning and use diffferrnt words (if that makes any sense)

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I would love to help put some notes to it. I can play quite a few instruments…:heart:

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That would be so cool!

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I would like to add chords (i play the piano) so is this a sad song or a more upbeat song?

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Sad-ish, thats so nice of you!!

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Ok i will see what i can do

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I don’t play piano, but I play guitar, recorder (it is stuck in my mind​:rofl:), tambourine, and base guitar. I think it is really cool that you play piano

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If you end up writing out the melody and chords for the song, let the people know so I can learn this on the piano someday!

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I am so sorry! No matter how hard i try i just can’t get it right with the cords and i just get irritated and stressed abt it so i have to pull out sorry