Wrote another thing, it has words

(side note, i have no idea what to title these posts)
Hello lovely perople of various variety!! I wrote another thing, decided to show ya’ll again. Hope you like it!!!

Once again, I’ve fallen through
The floorboards in a tiled room,
Found myself split into two
And ached in ways that remind me of you

The bells that ring do not exist
Every edge I walk is a mile-high cliff
To ache is to try not to slip
What becomes of me when I give in

I’d land on rock yet come up dry
But if I should be caught by eagles’ eyes
They’d pace this room like tracing the sky
But skies have limits, where are mine?

Again, I become a stone reflection
Of a story unworthy of redemption
To ache is by its own definition
Worse when you stay than when you’re missing

would love to know whatcha think! :cookie:Have a great day!!

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LOVE IT ABl <3

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amazing! I love your poetry! :heart_eyes:

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i love the way the words flow

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THANK U SM CORVlD :cookie::black_heart:

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Thank you Pickle!! :cookie::black_heart:

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thank youuuu :cookie:

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COURSEEEe <3

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ABIIIII its so good omggg

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thank you ariiiiii :cookie::black_heart:

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Omggg why does this hurt so much :sob: , Abi you are so good, a true poet lol (awful pun ik :pensive: :gun: )

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this is absolutely beautiful!!

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thank youuuu smmm :sob::black_heart::cookie:(i enjoyed the punXD)

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Thank you sm!!

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