Calling all artists what fo yall think of my piece! What do you think i could imporve for the next one? I would love some feedback!
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It’s look so good!!!
As far as feedback goes, I’d recommend tying to get a little bit more depth in it!
But then again, I’m not that good a painting, and this is way better than I could do, so overall I love it!!
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I love it! It looks amazing!! Some advice is a little more detail but I thinkbits fine the way it is!
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Is there like Japanese or Asian influence? It reminds me of those type of water paintings.
I like it!
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Yes there is! Its my favorite style of painting!
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It’s beautiful! I love the colors
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I don’t really have any tips cause it’s been a while since I’ve painted but I would suggest some outlines. Not even the whole thing like maybe, here and there. Highlight outlines i guess you would/ could call them.
You don’t have to use black but the darkest shade of the color you used.
I looked back at yours and saw you did similar to what I mentioned.
Remember to let it dry before you apply.
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Oh my goodness that looks awesome! Some recommendations would be adding more shaded depth, maybe shadows around it.. but that’s just an art style, idk, looks great to me!
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It looks so good!! Maybe an outline or adding gray shadows for a bit more depth? It looks so good though, I could never do that.
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This is an absolutely beautiful painting. You are doing a wonderful job layering the blue the creat your different shades to create depths of interest with your different pieces being outlined and highlighted with either more paint or more water to wash out the paint.
My eye is being drawn to this space. Either as a lower river valley or forest canopy below the cliff you have made or as a place of mountainous beauty onlookers may pullover and gaze at from
the place you have already painted.
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That looks amazing!! I think using a white gel pen then smearing it a bit would add amazing highlights. This is a drawing I’ve done so not technically for painting but if you look at the smeared bits they look similar to paints. Only highlight lightly so the edge of the tree. Maybe adding ripples in the water.
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Wow you are an AMAZING artist 
it’s truly beautiful . I think it’s perfect but if I had to say something then I’d say maybe a bit more shading 
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It looks great! The only feedback I would give is maybe I’d a little bit more shadow to the trees and ground. Just to give it a little bit more contrast with the blues. But it looks great and soooooo pretty!!
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Thannkyou!!
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It’s looks great! As others have said, adding some darker shades of blue in some areas would add a lot of depth and clarity 
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It’s so good love the colours
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Beautiful!
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Love this! 
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It’s really good! The shapes of the trees are really well defined. Like others have said, maybe make the parts closer to the front darker and more detailed while the parts in the back more faded.
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