First chapter- help!

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Hi! Young author (or trying to be) here!

I’m starting to write a novel, and I need some help with the first chapter. I have… two or three variations. This ones the most recent and I may start with that one.

But i need to know- does this interest you guys? Like if you picked up my book, are you gonna read it based off the first chapter? (I’m not sure I’m completely done with the first chapter but my hand hurts now LOL)

Note- I’m so sorry if some spots are hard to read. I have terrible handwriting!

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I would definitely read that!!
it sounds rlly interesting

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It sounds great! I already really like the whole sibling dynamic, I’d love to be tagged for updates if possible! :smiling_face: :purple_heart:

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Same it draws you in and I would love updates :)

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Hey everyone! Thanks for the great reviews so far! I’ll keep posting updates, I’m feeling pretty good about this!

@awatson44 :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes:

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Thank you for the tag!!! :heart:

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I loved reading it and would definitely read more!!

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