Sooo I just wrote a poem for the first time and I just wanted to know what y’all think of it! So here it is!
Painted Hearts
I’ve known it since
The moment we met
That I would fall for you,
You picked up a brush and suddenly
You painted hearts in my eyes.
2 years pass, something’s different
You’ve grown distant
The twinkle in your eyes has dimmed
And your lies have yet to begin
The Hearts you painted still exist
But the paint has cracked and chipped
Thats it!! Tell me your thoughts and suggestions!!:
Okayy soo I know I made this post like a bit more then a year ago but a lot of things happened between me and the person I wrote the poem for
This little comment had been on my brain since the moment I saw it and I really did want to add some more but I just didn’t know what else there was to say, until today (oh hey that rhymes) Soo here is a new (Maybe) finished version of the poem
Painted Hearts
I’ve known it since
The moment we met
That I would fall for you,
You picked up a brush
And painted hearts in my eyes.
2 years pass, something’s different
You’ve grown distant
The twinkle in your eyes has dimmed
And our lies have yet to begin
The hearts you painted still exist
But the paint has cracked and chipped
Another year skips
New paint is mixed
And feelings get twist
We’re friends again
The problems were fixed, the mistakes did mend
The hearts you painted are smooth and thick
But why does the feeling make me sick?
I love you I do, but do you love me too?
I let that sink in
I kept on thinking
Then one day you were acting strange
Did something change?
I noticed something in your eyes
Hearts painted just like mine.
Before I could ask, before I could think,
You broke the silence in the blink of an eye,
To let me know with a sudden rush,
I was the one holding the brush.
