Hello! I am writing a book at the moment, and need some feedback. I have been working on it for a while and have 30 Google docs pages so far. I want to continue writing, but also want some feedback on what I have so far for improvement. Thank you all so much!
here’s the link:
Heidi of Emberwing.pdf (506.5 KB)
<3 CraftyChicken
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Oh my it’s sooooooooo long. I will definitely read it when I have time! (I saved it) honestly it looks waaaay better than my snake lores
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Tysm!
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yeah I have been writing it for about a year now
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Oh wow! My snake lores take about an hour… My grandma keeps wanting me to become an author. But I have this distraction problem. I sorta morph into other ideas for a story when I’m making a story. I can’t write long things 
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yeah I had that problem but then I started scribbling down my ideas and putting them into a drawer for me to find them later…and when I did it all clicked and I knew exactly what I wanted to happen, it just was a matter of the details and that good stuff
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I should try that. Usually if one of my stories is important to me I keep on writing it
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How do you save it so I can read it later?
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just click the purple link and it will download
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Where would I find it later?
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in your downloads
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Yeah I don’t think I have that would it be on the device or the app?
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I don’t think so…see if you can access it
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Yes but that’s the only thing I can do
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That’s a great idea!
Plus, when I write I don’t try to write it down perfectly on the first write up.
I just vomit everything onto the page, and then I start chunking it into smaller pieces. Then I start to refine it into paragraphs, rearrange the paragraphs, then rearrange according to beginning, middle and end, then refining each paragraph, then clean up the punctuation, then clean up the formatting .
That’s my process.
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do you know how to access you files that’s sometimes what downloads are called
yeah I used to do it in notebooks but now I do it online because its so much easier to rearrange things
You’re correct it, clicking on the hyperlink allow s you to read it, but you can only read it in Ribblr. Unless there’s some way to right click it and you can choose a place to download it to.
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oh ok I will try to fix that
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yeah I will try again tomorrow its not loading right now sorry
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