poem story mix

Poem or something @Nunyah

I’m at the train

my boyfriend is there to

we arrive

were walking to my home

he puts me there

and he leaves without a kiss

it looks he’s mad on my

but why

the day after that I feel like someone is following me

but I don’t look back

I’m in the station

I feel someone breathe in my neck

I won’t look back

I’m scared

Then if feel something in my back

There is something warm floating on my back

I feel dizzy

I’m falling

I see a light

And my boyfriend did he do this

I don’t feel anything now

Am I dead

@Nunyah thanks for the theme

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ofc <3

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do you like it??
is it what you where thinking of??

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I do like it, but not quite, I gave you a tricky topic so don’t feel bad. I’ve never read or seen anything with romance and horror that doesn’t involve one of the people NOT being the killer. It’s either someone in the couple is a killer or it’s supernatural. I like testing people, don’t worry lol. I’m weird asf, I know. :))

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i can try again if you want

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If you want to, you can, I don’t mind. I’ve also never seen a story written from the perspective of the victim which is why I’m tryna reassure you. It still was very creative and the creativity is all that matters to me. <3

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ill try

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i make a lil story in place of a poem i think thats better

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Do whatever you want, I’m just tryna give ya ideas <33

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do you want bf gf/ bf bf/ gf gf

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whichever is fine :))

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okayy