Poetry Comp 13!!!

Hewo everyone!
I hope you are all doing well, as this is the 13th week of our poetry comp!
Also, just realized that I completely forgot to post the April poetry comp winner, that will be up tomorrow!
Happy Mother’s Day as well!
Last week’s winner was @Zodiredo , and if you would like to see their poem, pls go to the 12th poetry comp!
This week’s prompt was Was Cinderella Really Perfect?.
Good luck to everyone, and happy writing! -Yani, Alora

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Was Cinderella really perfect,
Or was it her blond silk waves?
Or those bright blue eyes
That deceived us all?

Was Cinderella really perfect?
Was she always kind to all?
Or was she just a girl,
Playing the victim?

Was Cinderella really perfect?
A gardener’s daughter,
Who pretended she was being forced,
When she had a choice to help clean or not.

Was Cinderella really perfect
When she wore those glass slippers?
Or was her whole plan,
Just to make her stepsisters jealous?

Was Cinderella really perfect?
Was her heart made of gold?
Or was it made of thorns,
As sharp as a rose bush?

They say looks can deceive,
They say the innocent holds guilt,
They say the most “perfect” person,
Is truly the most evil.

We spin the story of Cinderella,
Make her seem so innocent,
Make her seem so kind,
But is she truly?
Or is she just playing the victim?

#2

Cinderella, Cinderella

Perfect as could be

Yet what she really did

Was steal the lives of three

She ‘slipped’ and dropped her slippers

Wish she tumbled down those stairs

Said we made her cook and clean

A devil, blond and fair

Remember when I loved you?

Us three, thick as thieves

“Friends 'till the end”

How did you make us believe?

Anastasia, Anastasia

Spilled her wine and dirtied the floor

Just to watch you clean it up

Oh, Cinderella, how your luck was poor

Anastasia, Anastasia

She deserved her gruesome fate

She tried, she tried to explain

But it was far too late

She was just a pawn

In Cinderella’s game

She cut off her own heels

Just to watch Cinderella rise to fame

Anastasia, Anastasia

Watched her sister d*e

She knew that she was next

And she began to cry

“No mercy,” Cinderella said.

Guess you can’t trust friends

Because what she did next

Sealed Anastasia’s end.

As doves pecked out my eyes

Although I couldn’t see

I knew the smirk on Cinder’s face

What happened to us three?

Was Cinderella really perfect?

Ask Anastasia, if she weren’t de@d

Drizella, maybe? Oh, she’s gone too

Cinderella doesn’t spare a few

Even if they were best of friends

“Friends 'till the end,” she said.

Until she met the charming prince

And put the sisters to bed.

So, no, she wasn’t perfect

Although she looked to be

While she danced her fairytale life

Left us in agony.

#3

She balanced a crown atop her head,
And held her hand to him, she did.
He took her forth and down he led,
To the dance floor where they stand.

They swayed with his hand on her hip,
And round they twirled around the floor,
And down with the music they did dip,
Until the clock struck 12 and she fled out the door.

He begged her not to go, he did.
But Cinderella didn’t listen.
She ran and ran and ran and ran,
And all she left was a shoe to glisten.

Seen as a hero, seen as a star,
Little do they realize, she broke his heart.
He sat on the steps and felt so far,
Alone, he left, because she had dart.

Through the town he looked for love,
Asking girls to see if they’d fit,
He had the brains, oh, sure, of a dove,
But you had to admit, he was persistent.

And where was Cindy, where was she?
Did she look for her mate to be?
She cowered in her house and hid.
All because she ran, she did.

And when he came she cried on out,
Blamed her stepmother with no doubt.
But she was the one who fled.
What if she had stayed instead?

Was Cinderella really perfect?
Blaming others for her pain.
When she was the one who hid herself.
And nearly threw everything down the drain.

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And here are the participants in this week’s comp! (in no particular order)
@Kymram210
@ripple
@FreyaFaerie

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They’re all such amazing writers!! They always make it hard to choose :sob:

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