Would anyone like to read a snippet from my book?

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Hey! Would anyone like to read a snippet from my book? I don’t know if its good or not and I’d love some constructive feedback. It’s realistic fiction story. The main character, Beatrice, realizes she likes her friend Zamara. The part I’m asking about is the part when they finally get together! If you’d like some more info on my book please ask.
Thanks!

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I would love to if you want to :)